They might say, "Matt, you forgot that you recruited the new IT Project Manager in less than a week, and that's not even mentioned." That kind of information would be helpful. But typically you can ignore comments about formatting, such as: "You know, it's on plain white paper; the resume really should be on a nice parchment. It should be on a dark grey paper so it would stand out, or maybe even pink."
Basically, what we're trying to create is deep involvement. I want your audience to read through your resume and really study it. That's what this gets at.
#3: What do you think I want to do?
BF: Why is that critical?
Matt: Is my message clear? Are they getting what I want them to know about me?
BF: Correct. If they don't have a sharp, focused understanding where you're going, what you're trying to accomplish, and where you see yourself, they may make recommendations that are wildly off target.
My friend might say, "Bill, my brother made $250,000 last year in Amway, and I really feel that would be a great opportunity for you." In which case I would have to re-direct them by saying, "Thank you, Marsha. I appreciate your idea, but I don't have any particular sales ability." So the purpose of clarifying is to help them help you, and they can't help you unless they really have a good picture of what you're trying to do.
Matt: May I ask a question about this?
Given that I haven't specified an industry in my letter, the way some of other letter-writers have, and they want to stay in the construction industry or they look like they are health insurance guys . . . we're not putting boundaries like that on this, so do you think that not specifying an industry might be an issue?